I wonder if you will continue working on it. Sort of the way you returned immediately to the feverish building of another boat. Oh that is rich. Fleshing out whatever it is you are trying to do. Trying to say. Because certainly it is there, waiting, hiding, lurking somewhere between the far North and the telling of this tale. Certainly we all need to hear it said.
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Thank you for the well thought out and kind review.
Someday I hope to do further work on my stories. I've got a few squirreled away. Some I'm happier with than others but they could all stand to be touched up quite a bit. My dad is good at going back over his writings and spends considerable time editing them. I, on the other hand, tend to forget about them once they're out of my head. But I keep hoping that someday I'll start going through them again.
Alan